work in progress

I htought this piece was finished, but I think I need to do some adjustments on it. But I felt like I really hit something with it stylistically...I was trying to convey a sense of magic in jazz. The piece is called "song of the people", the jazz player plays his sax and the notes of the song become his audience...almost like he doesn't need much else but his music, which is his best friend.

I was also trying to mold he background with the foreground. i think the transition between the people and the music needs a little work, but expect but pieces like this from me!!

any comments?