Completed Pencils of Comics Page

Completed Panel 2 of Page 3

Hey, everybody. I finally finished the perspective shot on the comic book page posted in September. I would love some input as to whether it looks okay, or could be improved upon.

Thanks!

Vintage Bicycle

for a story I'm currently designing for

COMIC BOOK, PAGE 3

SO, THIS IS THE PAGE THAT COMES BEFORE THE PAGE I WAS WORKING ON LAST WEEK. IT'S PAGE 3. I STILL HAVE TO DO THE PERSPECTIVE SHOT OF THE BUILDING IN THE SECOND PANEL, AND THEN THE PENCILING STAGE OF THIS PAGE WILL BE COMPLETED.

WHAT DO YOU THINK?

COMIC IN PROCESS

HI, EVERYBODY,

I STARTED TO SKETCH AROUND ON THIS IMAGE THIS MORNING. IT'S PAGE 4 OF A COLLABORATIVE COMIC BOOK PROJECT I'VE BEEN INVOLVED WITH FOR QUITE SOME TIME. I WOULD ACTUALLY REALLY BENEFIT FROM A GATHERING. I COULD USE HELP WITH SOME OF THE POSES, THAT ARE DIFFICULT TO GET IN A MIRROR (OVER THE SHOULDER, FROM ABOVE, ETC.) IS ANYONE GAME?